Feedback on profile texts

Looking at your wishlist, the only card I could send you right now is an early seventies map card from somewhere Iā€™ve never been to in Wales. I would feel bad about it because you sound nice.

Thanks for the feedback. I tried to highlight that I acutally collect viewcards and any veiwcard would make me happy. Usually those are the ones almost everyone The other things listed are just special themes but a view card would not make me less happy.

I am sorry that was not clear. Do you have suggestions about how to rewrite? Or to make it any clearer? Maybe I should list general view cards as top of the list?

Edit: I tried to rephrase my profile so I hope things will get clearer now. Still I am happy for any suggestions. I do not want to give people the impression I am demanding things.

Thatā€™s the trouble, not all of us have access to view cards. Where I live, you can only buy view cards in one tourist information shop and one bookshop. Even if they were open, it would not be safe to go there. We are in tier 3 meaning a very high alert level.

Iā€™ve managed to buy some bulk lots of cards off eBay but they are much older than I am and none show my area. Iā€™ve got plenty of other cards to send. I donā€™t even like view cards myself.

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Yes, I think that would it make 100% clear, that you like viewcards the most. It would be a bit repetive in your profile, but I don`t see a problem in here.

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I have the same problem about view cards. If people ask for view cards from my area I cannot provide these either. However I always buy a lot when traveling.

Since you do not like viewcards yourself I get why you do not have many of these in stock. I find myself buying cards that I personally like (even if those are not the cards I collect).

But thanks, I try to make clearer that still other cards are welcome as well. As in official Postcrosing the sender can send whatever they want I am totally OK with that. So I try to make that clearer as well. Thank you.

@Jarana: Thanks for the feedback. I did not really put that I like viewcards on Top of my list as a bullet point but above all I tried to highlight that fact.

I just got back into Postcrossing and found the new forum. And I must admit that some topics have made me feel a bit insecure about my profile :flushed: (I know itā€™s a personal issue of mine, Iā€™m working on it :hugs:)

I myself like to get profiles with wishlist because I enjoy the hunt and creation of sending a ā€˜perfectā€™ card. So I have added a wishlist to my profile, but I donā€™t want to come across as demanding in any way! I donā€™t want to put off people, especially newbies.

Could you check out my profile and vote?

  • Friendly profile
  • Unfriendly profile
  • Confusing profile
  • Too demanding
  • Too long
  • Too short
  • Too little personal information
  • Enough personal information
  • Just right
  • Would know what to send
  • Would not know what to send
  • Other (please comment)

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Thank you!

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Hey Manon, looking good, not demanding at all!
For me the list feels very long, but thatā€™s mainly because you listed your favourite artists. Maybe when you write them between brackets behind the last bullet, that will just give another view of the same.
As indeed the feeling that you have a perfect matching card is great, but you need some info for that!

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I agree with this - the long list of names means nothing to me and itā€™s just confusing.

Do they all fit in a category? Would saying something like builders (such as Bob or Wendy) be enough? It would make it a lot easier to read.

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In my opinion a list is better than just putting the names after each other. To me itā€™s easier to read and find the name I might have when they are listed. :hugs:

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I agree, itā€™s easy to scan through the name list, if I think I might have some art card, so I would leave it as it is. Also, I think itā€™s good that itā€™s at the end of the list, so itā€™s not confusing.

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I also are for a name list, that seem cleaner than a write them in one long line.

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@ScubaET @elanlei @nnniiina @S_Tuulia @Jarana

Thank you so much for all your input :heart_eyes:so helpful!

I will add the note that it is a list of artists for clarity @elanlei.
But I will leave it as a list. I think that would be easiest to read.
I did indeed put it at the bottom to make it easiest @S_Tuulia :blush:

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Hi, I would appreciate feedback on my profile please.

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I like it, itā€™s a little different, but lovely, easy to read, leaves me happy :+1:

Please tell me your avatar is not a breakfast with your teenage daughter :laughing:

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Thereā€™s already such a topic: Feedback on profile texts

Itā€™s perfectly fine!

If you can, somehow, shorten it a tiny bit.

I have made better experiences with shorter profiles. From my experience, when the profile is too long many people donā€™t read it. With shorter profiles I have gotten more cards that match my wishes (however I donā€™t really care, the message is the most important thing to me).

I donā€™t mean you need to shorten the text (mine is just as long I would say) but get rid of a few of the blank spaces at the bottom (it will seem shorter and people wonā€™t be that overwhelmed).

@Calypso

I would say that yours is definitely too long. I would shorten it. I have had much better experiences with shorter profile texts. I think many people are overwhelmed by long profiles and donā€™t read them.

Also the ā€œwhat kind of postcard would I like to receiveā€-part is pretty far down so some people might overlook it.

I find the last part unnecessary as well. Donā€™t get me wrong, I would hate to receive postcards with any of these themes as well. But I donā€™t think many people send these cards and if they do they probably wouldnā€™t care anyway whether youā€™d want them or not.

Overall you profile is very nice :slight_smile:

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Iā€™d love some feedback! Iā€™m regularly tweaking my profile. I used to keep both a forum and official profile, but it became tedious to update both, so I now just have the official profile.

I would love any feedback regarding my profile, please and thank you!

  • Just enough personal information
  • Too much personal information
  • More personal information needed
  • Emojis (in official profile) are distracting
  • Wishes are easy to fulfill
  • Wishes are hard to fulfill
  • Too many wishes are listed
  • Writing ideas are helpful
  • Writing ideas are not needed
  • More writing ideas are needed
  • Profile is easy to read
  • Profile is too long and/or messy
  • Order of profile is logical
  • Order of profile is illogical
  • Tone of profile is friendly
  • Tone of profile is not friendly and/or demanding
  • Other (please comment below)

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My only suggestion would be to check for some grammatical errors (mostly punctuation and capitalization), but thatā€™s just the writer in me talking. Despite that, itā€™s easy to follow and friendly.